Navaratnam, Kaya - https://comnk.design.blog/2020/03/26/dream/

Wow. Giiirllllll I could really feel the emotion and the feelings you really put into making and creating this beautiful piece. Honestly the way you start it without even saying that you're asleep and talk about your dream straight away like DAMN GIRL can it get any better???? Oh wait yes it does. Literally reading it made me think about my own writing and how i should have added abit of dialogue into it but oh well we live n we learn. Anyways I love it, honestly worth the read. The ending was sad and I hope you were okay by the end cause i definitely wasn't lmaoooo

Thank you for sharing

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Hutchison, Daisy  - https://rgb3006.wixsite.com/mysite/posts

I love it. I could really picture what you were saying and I believe that's what's writing is all about you know - creating images using just words. I absolutely love it. The best thing about this piece is the way you make me want me to read it over and over and over again (which is a first because if you personally knew me something has to be really interesting to grab my attention otherwise I will just turn a blind eye it) I love the way you structure your writing because in a way you're teaching me how to structure my next assignments yah feel. Other than that, I loved the words you used and it felt like you knew the story inside out and that you were Sarah. Girl you are a natural writer period.

Thank you for sharing,

p.s teach me how to better my writing cause you got some pretty dope techniques

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Min, Kyung hwan - https://minkhblog.wordpress.com/

I've watched the whole series back to back and I must say. FINALLY. Do you know how many times Joe annoyed me? Every time Beck was in danger I was like damn she really like needs a good guy (some typa body guard or sumn) to help her out you know someone to tell her that JOE IS A PEDOOOO!! Like Joe is a great character don't get me wrong especially in season 2 when Joe meets his maker and we're all like on his side or whatever but still. Thank you for including me in your essay because I felt like the directors should've included me in the series too because the amount of times I wanted to punch Joe through the screen is countless. There were bits in the essay where I didn't understand what you were saying but because I've seen the series I had a fair idea about what you were writing. I liked it though no cap.

Thanks for sharing man, good job

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My own fan fiction

I know it wasn't what people were expecting I mean honestly I didn't even expect it either. But because I love poems I thought of the film 10 things I hate about you and straight away thought about writing a poem for my nana. I mean I believe I wrote a good piece because obviously I wrote it myself and I'll support myself all the way lmao period. It's just like damn I can't believe my first thousand word essay that was handed in on my first year of uni was about my nana. Overall 1,000,000,000,000 (don't even know how ta say this number or whateva) outta 10 for myself keep it up.

Love you girllllll

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